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Still need some work.

Judging from the fact there is no sound, im guessing this is one of your first, my advice to you is this - Redirect your efforts to one thing at a time, try and learn about sound and get really good at making the sound match the right part of the animation, and getting good quality music.

After that i think you should consider what you are going to be, sprite artist, flash artist, or both, and practice the animation in which style you favour most.

Take one thing at a time and you'll be fine.

About the animation - The sprites were a bit 'dated', by that i mean that the sprites were pretty old and i think you should've gotten sprites from a game more recent like 'Super Mario World' or 'New Super Mario Bros.'

the humor got dry after a bit but you had some funny ideas, that sewage pipe gag with the turtles was pretty original, so keep that up.

Good luck getting better. =)

mr-sweden responds:

hey dude it is sound in yhis movie cant you hear it.
and i yoused 8-bit mario becuse it's esier with him. it will probably be a long time until i youse sprites from 'new super mario bros'
anyway thanks for the review.

Sup guys, im a dude who really sucks at animation ATM, but im getting better, teachers needed lol. Seriously.

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